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The Real Deal - by Darrel Duckworth (Read 289 times)
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The Real Deal - by Darrel Duckworth
Jan 07th, 2017, 10:32am
I promised on another thread that I am going to inflict some feedback on anotherealm readers regarding some 2016 stories. So here is my first 2-bits worth.

Gary needs to be congratulated on a strong start to 2016. "The Real Deal" was a very enjoyable story on several counts:
1. "Deal with the devil" stories abound but this story managed to find a new angle.
2. The dialogue, particularly of the she-devil, is crackling good.
3. Characteristics of a loser are succinctly presented.
4. I love stories that are good but short, and this one fits the bill perfectly.
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