Gary, if you came close to rejecting this engaging story because of some misplaced/misspelled/misused words, etc., -- well, you dodged the bullet. This story was absolutely fascinating. Creepy, weird, wild, scary, whatever words one may wish to use to describe a supernatural/fantasy story featuring not just one but several real, live ghosts -- Some online gamer spam!
  After all, our jobs as editors at times involve digging the gems out of whatever matter surrounds them. In the case of this story, whatever digging you had to do was well done -- IMO this story is a gem!