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The Place for a Good Crop by John DesPlaines (Read 798 times)
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The Place for a Good Crop by John DesPlaines
May 04th, 2012, 4:36am
 
Loved it, John. There are several things that are very appealing to me. First, SF is my favorite genre, so you had me pretty much from the start. Then I really appreciate the work you've put into it. Either this is a slice of a larger project or you put a great deal of thought into developing the background story. All the details in the background hint at more and I want more! Thanks, John.
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Re: The Place for a Good Crop by John DesPlaines
Reply #1 - May 4th, 2012, 9:38pm
 
Way to comment!

Well done!
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Re: The Place for a Good Crop by John DesPlaines
Reply #2 - May 10th, 2012, 6:00pm
 
The story's well-written, but seems to me to be part of a larger project.
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Re: The Place for a Good Crop by John DesPlaines
Reply #3 - May 23rd, 2012, 4:51pm
 
This could easily be part of a bigger project but I think it stands alone pretty well too.
I like the children's rhyme. It adds something- maybe a touch of authenticity. I can see the little kids playing this game.
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