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Message started by ahmedakhan on Jan 7th, 2017, 10:32am

Title: The Real Deal - by Darrel Duckworth
Post by ahmedakhan on Jan 7th, 2017, 10:32am

I promised on another thread that I am going to inflict some feedback on anotherealm readers regarding some 2016 stories. So here is my first 2-bits worth.

Gary needs to be congratulated on a strong start to 2016. "The Real Deal" was a very enjoyable story on several counts:
1. "Deal with the devil" stories abound but this story managed to find a new angle.
2. The dialogue, particularly of the she-devil, is crackling good.
3. Characteristics of a loser are succinctly presented.
4. I love stories that are good but short, and this one fits the bill perfectly.

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