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Title: The Place for a Good Crop by John DesPlaines Post by gschaade on May 4th, 2012, 4:36am Loved it, John. There are several things that are very appealing to me. First, SF is my favorite genre, so you had me pretty much from the start. Then I really appreciate the work you've put into it. Either this is a slice of a larger project or you put a great deal of thought into developing the background story. All the details in the background hint at more and I want more! Thanks, John.

Title: Re: The Place for a Good Crop by John DesPlaines Post by Webbie on May 4th, 2012, 9:38pm Way to comment! Well done!

Title: Re: The Place for a Good Crop by John DesPlaines Post by Alyson on May 10th, 2012, 6:00pm The story's well-written, but seems to me to be part of a larger project.

Title: Re: The Place for a Good Crop by John DesPlaines Post by Adrienne_Ray on May 23rd, 2012, 4:51pm This could easily be part of a bigger project but I think it stands alone pretty well too. I like the children's rhyme. It adds something- maybe a touch of authenticity. I can see the little kids playing this game.

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