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Message started by monsoonster on Oct 22^nd, 2011, 6:38pm

Title: An Unexpected Evening Ride by Indrani Bhattacharyya
Post by monsoonster on Oct 22^nd, 2011, 6:38pm

I normally dislike letter style stories, but this was nicely done, although the ending left me kinda; huh? From romping around a time machine, ending with... a reminder to go grocery shopping? Well, it was a letter, I guess. But good story. With more words, you could turn it into a real story. ;)

Title: Re: An Unexpected Evening Ride by Indrani Bhattacharyya
Post by Indrani on Dec 1^st, 2011, 7:40am

Hi
sorry to have replied so late..because of some unknown reasons..I can hardly access this page..thank you for giving your feedback..every writer longs for feedback..as long as its constructive!!..:)
and in order to answer your question..you know why in a letter of time machine..reminder of doing grocery pops up?!..to bring back the reality..as a writer..I believe.. any creation..be it writing..painting..photography..or any other medium..'being sponteneous' helps..:))
I really don't know i when I would be able to view this page..its my internet problem I guess..:(
but I would love to have your feedback even on my other writing..:)
stay well..:)